Either Grace, Classic or Bad Grammar. (Bloodshed mentions Mister N)

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Either Grace, Classic or Bad Grammar. (Bloodshed mentions Mister N)

Post  Morris Brown on Sat Jul 01, 2017 8:27 am

The camera appears backstage in a hallway. There is a hip hop instrumental beat playing as Captain Smokey is seen sitting on an equipment box doodling in a notebook.
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Bex walks up beside him holding a microphone with a puzzled look on her face as she goes to speak
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Bex: What is that noise?
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Smokey looks up from his notebook with a shocked face
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Cpt Smokey: That is 808s by Tyler, The Creator. It's a classic
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Smokey looks back at his notebook and continues to draw
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Bex: I think a classic would be more old school, not new trap music or whatever that is
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Smokey looks back up from his notebook and raises an eyebrow
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Cpt Smokey: This is not trap music. It's a classic
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Smokey directs his attention to the notebook
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Bex: A classic would be like Frank Sinatra, or a widely familiar Beatles song or something of that nature.
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Smokey takes a deep breathe and then looks back at Bex
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Cpt Smokey: Nah, this is a classic
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Smokey continues to doodle in his notebook.
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Bex: Maybe even "I Get Knocked Down" would be a classic.
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Smokey looks at Bex confused.
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Cpt Smokey: That's not a classic. This is one.
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Smokey continues to doodle
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Bex: It is na- Nevermind, Smokey, you are acting childish!
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Smokey looks up again from his notebook with a shocked face
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Cpt Smokey: Listen, usually I would correct for calling me by the wrong name. And I should shun you and insult you for calling me childish.... Buuuut, thanks this lovely thing I'm working on
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Smokey gets down from the equipment box and hands the notebook to Bex
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Cpt Smokey: Hold it up so everyone can see.
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The notebook reads "Grace" in big blocky letters
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Cpt Smokey: By grace, I will turn the other cheek and show you love. As God has shown me.
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Bex goes to speak as Captain Smokey keeps on rambling
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Cpt Smokey: Now listen, grace is something I should have showed Kaleb Konnely. I didn't, he deserved it. So, sorry that he had to suffer from my rage. But, that is what happens when you mess with someone of my caliber.
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Smokey flexes and then winks at Bex as he continues
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Cpt Smokey: Like this beautiful song that I am playing on a constant loop. I am a classic. A Classic Man let's say. Kaleb, stepped to a classic man like myself. And I set him on the shelf like a cup that just came out of the laundry mat.
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Bex: It's a dishwasher.
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Cpt Smokey: What does a dishwasher have to do with this? Regardless, I got rid of Kaleb. And I feel sorry for Mister O, because he is getting the laundry mat treatment.
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Bex: It is a dishwasher! And you didn't even say his name-
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Smokey holds his hand out
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Cpt Smokey: My bad, I said it wrong. I am taking Doctor P to the ironing board so he can get ready to be put on the shelf!
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Bex puts her hand on her forehead and sighs underneath her breathe. She looks back at Smokey
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Bex: I, I.... I don't even know where to begin on how wrong you are in that sentence. However you got yourself dressed today let alone graduated high school is beyond me.
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Smokey points at the notebook
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Cpt Smokey: Grace Becky. Be mindful and not rude.
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Smokey smirks at his statement
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Cpt Smokey: That's funny, because those are things I'm not going to be to Professor Alphabet.
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Bex looks enraged and exclaims
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Bex: It's Mister N!
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Smokey takes a step back and looks at her.
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Cpt Smokey: You are easily enraged, and need to take a chill pill. You're not you when you're hungry Bex. Here,
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Smokey reaches in his pocket and pulls out Snickers bar
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Cpt Smokey: Eat a Snickers, which happens to be sponsoring Bloodshed tonight!
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Smokey holds the bar up and gives a thumbs up to the camera before passing the bar off to Bex
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Bex looks at Smokey and unwraps it and takes a bite
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Cpt Smokey: Better?
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Bex: Sure....
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Cpt Smokey: Good, because, whether or not. I'm going to keep this simple and not think of new slogans that aren't working. Whether he is a mister, a misses, a son, a full grown adult, or whimsy kiddy baby who just used old spice for this first time. I'm going to whip that gracious hubba bubba ass of Mister N and keep on doing what I do best.
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Smokey walks away from Bex as she looks at the camera confused
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The camera begins to fade away


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Re: Either Grace, Classic or Bad Grammar. (Bloodshed mentions Mister N)

Post  Morris Brown on Sat Jul 01, 2017 8:30 am

Heat & Feedback please
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Post  Tom Midas on Sun Jul 02, 2017 7:37 am

Nothing to really critique here, just here to say great rp as usual, Smokey Smile
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